Lilypad

I think you did a really good job with the shading and textures, but I think it's missing a base, like when you're suppose to map everything out before you start laying down concrete lines.

What I mean is, there's a really nice range of values and your lines look very clean, and at the same time sketchy enough that the piece takes on a very artsy sort of look but I think that you may have missed a step with the shapes, the shape of her face is really kind of distorted and inconsistent, but I think that simply redrawing the outline of the exposed parts of the face and making them a little straighter and consistent would really help the overall quality of the drawing.

Right now I would describe her face as "lumpy" in some parts. I think that just redoing the shape of the head though would bring this up to near perfection.

It's just a drawing of a celebrity so I'm not giving it much on Originality and Impact, but I don't think that's what you were going for anyways so I hope that doesn't seem unfair.